Chapter 16 of Eclipse

[mijan]

"Eclipse" has been updated.  Chapter sixteen, entitled "And Straight On 'Till Morning", has been posted.  It's the longest chapter yet, and I dare say the most intense.  Enjoy it, and perhaps leave me a review over on Schnoogle. 

-P

Comments

[green-loofa.livejournal.com]

*sniffles* I adore Eclipse. It's truly one of the best stories I've ever read. Usually I stick to M ratings simply because i'm kind of a d/h perv but i absolutely loveedd this fic. It had such a good plot and was soo full of emotion that it didn't matter that there wasn't much intimate action.

Your Draco and Harry are unbelievably believable in this and not OOC at all =D

I cried during chapter 16. It really was the most intense chapter so far. I'm dying to know what happens next so I'll be keeping tabs on fanfiction and so then I know when you're out of the army XP..

Congrats on an awesome fanfic! =)

[mijan.livejournal.com]

LOL... for a person who mostly likes smut, it's amazing you like this story! There's pretty much NO smut in it... although the stripping scene was enjoyably suggestive. (It's amazing that I haven't had them shag yet either... I'm a little pervert myself.)

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter... that means a lot to me that I was able to touch people with it. So... thank you. *blushes*
*hugs*

[green-loofa.livejournal.com]

Haha.. yep. I'm a smut addict. XP Yeah. there isn't a hint of smut, but it suits Eclipse. And seeing as how you also like smut, congrats on being able to keep them from shagging. XP..I really enjoyed it. It's a refreshing change. =P And a very original plot. *glomps*

lol yep.. I think a lot of people cried from it. *hugs* lol me included. XP

[mijan.livejournal.com]

Awww... *gives tissues* Seriously, the fact that I was able to make people cry means that I did something *right*, and that makes me feel pretty good about the story. And I don't know how original the plot is, but I'm glad someone thinks it is! When I started writing it, I was afraid that someone had done something like it already, so I searched for a few weeks, and finally decided it was safe to start posting the fic. :)