Chapter 16 of Eclipse

[mijan]

"Eclipse" has been updated.  Chapter sixteen, entitled "And Straight On 'Till Morning", has been posted.  It's the longest chapter yet, and I dare say the most intense.  Enjoy it, and perhaps leave me a review over on Schnoogle. 

-P

Comments

[mijan.livejournal.com]

LOL... for a person who mostly likes smut, it's amazing you like this story! There's pretty much NO smut in it... although the stripping scene was enjoyably suggestive. (It's amazing that I haven't had them shag yet either... I'm a little pervert myself.)

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter... that means a lot to me that I was able to touch people with it. So... thank you. *blushes*
*hugs*

[green-loofa.livejournal.com]

Haha.. yep. I'm a smut addict. XP Yeah. there isn't a hint of smut, but it suits Eclipse. And seeing as how you also like smut, congrats on being able to keep them from shagging. XP..I really enjoyed it. It's a refreshing change. =P And a very original plot. *glomps*

lol yep.. I think a lot of people cried from it. *hugs* lol me included. XP

[mijan.livejournal.com]

Awww... *gives tissues* Seriously, the fact that I was able to make people cry means that I did something *right*, and that makes me feel pretty good about the story. And I don't know how original the plot is, but I'm glad someone thinks it is! When I started writing it, I was afraid that someone had done something like it already, so I searched for a few weeks, and finally decided it was safe to start posting the fic. :)