Chapter 16 of Eclipse

[mijan]

"Eclipse" has been updated.  Chapter sixteen, entitled "And Straight On 'Till Morning", has been posted.  It's the longest chapter yet, and I dare say the most intense.  Enjoy it, and perhaps leave me a review over on Schnoogle. 

-P

Comments

[zentariana.livejournal.com]

Just wanted you to know that your writing is amazing. Your story actually manages to make sense. It's fantastic to read.
D/H is one of those pairings where something really odd has to happen before it works and time must be taken to walk the reader through the process if it's going to make sense and you did that.
As for real life, I hope you hear things soon (but since I have a brother who was in the army, I know how these things go) so you don't go crazy. And good luck. When you get back, I'm sure you'll start writing fanfic where they go to really really hot, unplesant places, yeah? :)

[mijan.livejournal.com]

LOL... I already write fanfic where Harry and Draco go lots of really hot places... but I don't think that's what you're talking about. No, when I get back, I'll be working on my original novel, I hope.

Anyhow, I'm glad you're enjoying Eclipse! My fondest wish is that it will be completed before I leave for Iraq. I'd hate to leave something like that incomplete. And yeah, with a brother in the Army, you know how maddening it can be. I just want to be here, at home, through October, and then I'll be willing to leave without hesitation. *sigh* I hate hot weather. And I hate sand. I want snow. *sigh again*