Mmkay, I have AATKM and all four parts of Convergence open for a reread, and all nineteen chapters of this, ready for me in bite-size chunks. (Where I'm gonna be the next few days, Internet is scarce but time is plentiful). I'll probably read slowly, a few minutes at a time, but I'll try to comment as I go along.
Little thing: most of your chapter headings are spelled out, e.g., "Chapter One." But there are three which are not: Chapter 8, Chapter 18, and Chapter 19. I don't know if you care but in case you do, I thought I'd let you know.
I'll see you on the other side of these... 223,868 words.
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Date: 2010-11-28 12:39 am (UTC)Little thing: most of your chapter headings are spelled out, e.g., "Chapter One." But there are three which are not: Chapter 8, Chapter 18, and Chapter 19. I don't know if you care but in case you do, I thought I'd let you know.
I'll see you on the other side of these... 223,868 words.