I know, the detail is what I love about your writing. Stuff like "plascrete" and all the computer monitors and phaser details from the sim are fantastic. You make it feel very real. I also love clever!Jim, and you write him so well. I'm looking forward to seeing what else happens!
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Date: 2010-11-20 07:42 pm (UTC)