Wow. I'm impressed, truly. This was fabulous. The characterization of both Kirk and Bones was spot on. And the subtle humor and quirkiness of Jim's thoughts painted him so vividly in my mind while I read.
Jim almost laughed out loud. "Fuck, no. More people would say that I need one." LOL! Loved that.
Most touching, though was the first hint of camaraderie between Kirk and Bones, and the hint of their close bond to come. Especially with lines like:
Whatever McCoy's reason for giving a shit about the broken, bloody, beaten mess that was James T. Kirk, the fact remained that he did. *happy sigh* Just wonderful.
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Date: 2009-08-05 11:12 pm (UTC)Jim almost laughed out loud. "Fuck, no. More people would say that I need one." LOL! Loved that.
Most touching, though was the first hint of camaraderie between Kirk and Bones, and the hint of their close bond to come. Especially with lines like:
Whatever McCoy's reason for giving a shit about the broken, bloody, beaten mess that was James T. Kirk, the fact remained that he did. *happy sigh* Just wonderful.