http://gone-ashore.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] gone-ashore.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mijan 2009-11-24 07:16 pm (UTC)

This is a great start. Well written and fast paced, and I love the glimpse of Jim in the bathroom--very in character. Looking forward to more!
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